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11 August 2007 @ 06:55 pm
Cry for help  
Well a beta anyway. Would anyone be willing to beta part 3 of my Highlander/Firefly crossover? I'm not as happy with it as I was with earlier parts and I'd really appreciate some input.
 
 
 
She went that-a-way...: serenitytroublejinxed_wood on August 11th, 2007 06:34 pm (UTC)
I'll happily look over it for grammer and syntax, but I'm not sure what else you'll need - is it plot, dialogue, or character developement that you're having problems with?
But, I don't want to be a pie,: Richie2idontlikegravy on August 11th, 2007 06:46 pm (UTC)
Mainly plot, but I suppose dialogue too. It's nothing I can really put my finger on, I'm just not happy with it.
I'm tempted to bin the whole bloody chapter and start again actually. There's a twist at the beginning of the chapter and I'm not entirely sure I should have put it in.
But, I don't want to be a pie,: fireflyidontlikegravy on August 11th, 2007 06:48 pm (UTC)
Would the most expedient thing be to post it flocked?
She went that-a-way...: richiejinxed_wood on August 11th, 2007 07:00 pm (UTC)
That or send it, as an attachment, to my email address:

jinxed_wood@yahoo.co.uk
But, I don't want to be a pie,: happinessidontlikegravy on August 11th, 2007 07:07 pm (UTC)
Much appreciated, thank you.
Like the sexy Richie icon btw. :)